It is said, that approximately 2000 years ago there lived a species of purple crocodile that roamed the earth. These creatures were the most fierce and dangerous creatures in the whole entire planet and humanity lived in fear. Until one day, a twisted minded professor decided it was time for a change, he was going to teach those varmints that humans were the ones who ruled earth. He knew it was going to be difficult but he decided that if he didn’t do it no one else would. The next morning, he set of on an unforgettable journey of a lifetime.
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I REALLY enjoy you story! The academic language, and descriptive details really contrasts with the environment of the story. Keep up the great work!
Great story!
An excellent story idea. Please watch for minor errors, such as the last sentence, ” he set of on an unforgettable journey…” Do you see what’s wrong there?